Chidori Yoshino

Got a question, concern, suggestion and etc? Please put it here! It'd really help if I knew what I was doing wrong/right in terms of a character like this, so all critique (both "you're doing great, i like [this] and [that]" and "hey, i have some concerns on [this]..." are included!) is very welcome.

Anon on, IP off, Screening off.

[ Player Name ] : Peace
[ Personal DW ] : ashitaka
[ Age ] : 19
[ Timezone ] : EST
[ Other Characters ] : N/A

[ Character's Name ] : Chidori Yoshino
[ Character's Age ] : None given, estimated around 16-17.
[ Series ] : Persona 3
[ Canon Point ] : After Takaya and Jin break her out of the hospital, before her final confrontation with S.E.E.S. So November 21st.

( under here!! )